Closed DOESN'T EVEN MIND

[PHC-kuyhaa_ratiborus]

I was not looking for
a perfect partner,
But I'm thinking how
perfect life would be with her,
I started courting her
over and over ;
Expecting a yes that
she would answer

But in all of a sudden feeling,
Hurtful love is existing
I'm doing everything ;
She does nothing

In all the seriousness I've shown,
Answer from here is still unknown
It badly hurts for my side;
That in her eyes she shows
she doesn't mind

She's ignoring my presence,
And the love I'm offering
It seems that see think
I'm talking nonsense ;
Well in fact, too much effort
I'm really exerting

-- Libre Lait mga Master --
ginawan ng cover ng kaibigan kong babae pakinggan nyo nlang nasa link yung file, yung record mdyo malabo kc nasa bhouse lang yan noon, way back 4th yr college pa ako..
Poem lang talaga sana to kaso naisip ko na pwde nman din gawing kanta..
Sana magustuhan nyo..
Dagdagan nyo nlang kung gusto nyo, open yan for revisions, meron din mga words and dinagdag yung ng cover nyan..

Original Composition
-Yours truly

Performed
-(BGT) (pseudonym)

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gandang gabi mga makata

 

[gomenacy00]

I was not looking for a perfect partner,
But my life could be perfect if I am to be with her,
I started courting her, over and over;
Expecting that yes, would be her answer.

But all of a sudden, I have this feeling.
That hurtful love is indeed existing
I have all been doing everything;
While she does nothing.

In all the seriousness I've shown,
Answer from her is still unknown
It badly hurts for my side;
That in her eyes she shows, she doesn't mind.

She's ignoring my very presence,
And all the love that I've offered.
All my effort seems so worthless,
To her eyes, that must be blinded.


Boss ayos concept mo, mukhang may pinanghuhugutan ah haha okay lang yan. eto pala version ko, may binago at dagdag lang ng konti. sana magustuhan mo rin.

 

[PHC-kuyhaa_ratiborus]

I was not looking for a perfect partner,
But my life could be perfect if I am to be with her,
I started courting her, over and over;
Expecting that yes, would be her answer.

But all of a sudden, I have this feeling.
That hurtful love is indeed existing
I have all been doing everything;
While she does nothing.

In all the seriousness I've shown,
Answer from her is still unknown
It badly hurts for my side;
That in her eyes she shows, she doesn't mind.

She's ignoring my very presence,
And all the love that I've offered.
All my effort seems so worthless,
To her eyes, that must be blinded.


Boss ayos concept mo, mukhang may pinanghuhugutan ah haha okay lang yan. eto pala version ko, may binago at dagdag lang ng konti. sana magustuhan mo rin.

Ayos din to paps..
Tnx sa feedback!