Closed Poem #4

[MisterSenpai]

"The Forbbiden Hide and Seek"



It's been a while since when Im young
Remembering all the day's will come
The road in life doesn't fair enough
Rough path ways seems its always laugh

There's so many years, go passing by
I told myself "Single nanaman"
The christmas coming, year by year
Totaly brings me, to snowy tear

How rude this life, approaching near?
A cold and breezy wind, touching me
Walk alone a days a weeks
Until it comes again in years

But until then I meet a girl
Who doesn't seem to give a twirl
But when the months always done
This feeling breezy turns to fire

A lot of deeds, comes in mind
How if I told to her "Ako'y na-inlove?"
Did she would take this thing called Love?
Or she ignore me and turn went out?

But I decide to become a deaf
To what my feelings tries to beat
Even this whole heart, will be burst
I still want to hide it and not to talk



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cutemedievil

 

[MisterSenpai]

wrong image lol... follow up nalang

 

[madogou]

again, nice poem. the thought you put in this is very good. there is room for improvement though. I suggest you improve your english grammar and this poem will jump from nice to phenomenal.

 

[MisterSenpai]

again, nice poem. the thought you put in this is very good. there is room for improvement though. I suggest you improve your english grammar and this poem will jump from nice to phenomenal.

hopefuly i can manage to improve my english grammar. these is the worst enemy that i have right now in my life.

 

[madogou]

hopefuly i can manage to improve my english grammar. these is the worst enemy that i have right now in my life.

read english books and poems lang sir. hindi naman kailangan pumunta ng america or anything. mahahasa ka din sa grammar.

 

[baguling]

Ahhhm

 

[MisterSenpai]

read english books and poems lang sir. hindi naman kailangan pumunta ng america or anything. mahahasa ka din sa grammar.

salamat po sir

 

[cutemedievil]

Tho the message is clear, I don't mind the grammar. I like to think I'm decent in English, baka gusto mo lessons? hahaha

 

[MisterSenpai]

Tho the message is clear, I don't mind the grammar. I like to think I'm decent in English, baka gusto mo lessons? hahaha

Libre po? ok lang po sakin basta may tissue hehe.

 

[cutemedievil]

Libre po? ok lang po sakin basta may tissue hehe.

Ikaw na magprovide aba. Libre na nga eh. Hahaha

 

[MisterSenpai]

Ikaw na magprovide aba. Libre na nga eh. Hahaha

may new post po ako ulit pacorrect wahahhaha
mediyo senti ako now

 

[baguling]

I am not a professional artist. .But for me an effective poem is contains a heart and soul for as the reader to feel and understand more.. Paano nga kung magka rhyme ng bawat katapusan ng linya..pero di mo naman naiintindihan kung ano yung content ng tula.

-bagul-

 

[MisterSenpai]

I am not a professional artist. .But for me an effective poem is contains a heart and soul for as the reader to feel and understand more.. Paano nga kung magka rhyme ng bawat katapusan ng linya..pero di mo naman naiintindihan kung ano yung content ng tula.

-bagul-

may new post po ulit ako pa check kung tama ate. salamat