Thank you author TS. Maaksiyon na siya ha. hahaha Akala ko dati medyo malamya itong si 1st character, mautak pala.
1. Is it docking or ducking?
2. Di ko maintindihan itong part, "whispers what sounds of a female"
3. "still holding her wounded abdomen". di ba lalaki si jersan?
4."trying as i can to calm myself to regain my senses back"...hindi ba puwede i rephrase dagdagan ng necessary na salita?
5. Yung "he" referring sa android, ok lang naman yata yun.