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"Be part of success not a mistake"





Life, This is the only key to live
Don't waste it, never waste every single day and you'll find out how life is beautiful not a waste
You know, some of people who say's "they wanna die" but most of people say's "They wanna live"
All of this words inside their deeds, All of this deeds becomes belief
So how you can ignore such a thing who do nothing will hurt you?
How do you dare to ignore this kind of gift from our God above?
Is this the worst gift that we ever recieved?
To use it and bring it to the hell of worst instead?

Always remember we only had one shot of chance to become the worth breathing, not to worst living
Life is the only key of all the above
Whatever options do you have
Try to forget it and remember the life, the gift from the above
Life is realy short, one wrong mistake will lead you whore
Don't ever make it wrong, these is correct and life never become wrong

I don't know you even, I don't know what you're thinking
But I know how life working
Besides I'm doing it right now and bringing it to the best of my time living
I don't care who you are, I don't even care what is was
But I care about our needs, we all people wants to live not to become was to live
I don't get it if you get it what I want you to get it
Yes I know this world is unfair
Either you or me, rich or poor even a strong or weak
But don't you dare to give up and just do nothing about it
Don't you ever dare to slap your life to the death to become a worst and die
Don't you ever dare to ignore someones telling truth than those telling lies
They just an illusion to make you horny on lust
They just acting like this is your very last for chance
They just a temptation but will leave you in the middle of dance

I'm standing here right after you, just to spend time just for you
And you know what? what I care all about out of these between me and you?
Because of love, because I want to make our God proud about what I care to become
I never intend to become one just to make him proud only in me
I never intend those things will bring my life above him
If you think this is a Lie why should I still standing here in my line?
If you think this is only a Lie why should I spending here with my time?
Oh, you don't know time? I'm sorry..
Because you already prove to our God that Time is only a waste for us
For us to wait the Time of what our God's plan on us
I'm sorry of what our God made your mind thinking that this is the worst thing happen to our life
I'm sorry, I didn't meant to, to act like I want to
In the first place I already told you that I care about our days including times
To ignore all of this lust and temptation they blast
I'm sorry, but I never ignored this kind of a situations involved

If this sincere never hits your nerve
I want to still act like I am the only way to evolve
I want to become as kind as our God
To become stronger and have a positive helping guide of hand
If this helping and motivating others is a weak ways for you
I'm still doing this because the real weak is YOU
Always rember to be part of SUCCESS not a MISTAKE.



Originality by Unknown Motivator
Inspired by Prince Ea with his Spoken Poetry about; "
Dear Future Generations: Sorry
"




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Yes. I am impressed. But don't just settle for 'impressed'. "Never Settle".

If being honest make you rich...
I think I am... I am rich.. because the reason why... behind with these...
I want to Honestly Make others Impressed
with all my work.. had to be done hardwork.
 
I'm a terrible liar. Trust me, you'd know if I'm lying. Lmao

thats fine. its already inherent to us human to do something lies behind the scenes
but still try to become honest even if its hard and gives you frightened consequences..
it will brings you free..
 
"Be part of success not a mistake"
:) "Be part of the success not the mistake " or "Be part of a success not a mistake "
 
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