What's new

Closed English reading & writing

Status
Not open for further replies.

PHC - Jheyms

Honorary Poster
Joined
Aug 23, 2017
Posts
481
Reaction
50
Points
194
Hi guys kailangan na kailangan ko ng tulong pinapagawa kami ng outline the thing is mahina ako sa subject na ito at hindi ko alam kung paano siya gagawin ng tama kase pag pinasa namin to once na may fail kami mag iisip na kami ng iproproject sa kanya. help po sa mga magagaling sa Academic Reading & Writing

General Topic: Evolution of Technology
Specific Topic is : Evolution of Hard Disk Drives
 
hindi ko makita ang outline mo, hirap maging established hahaa
Eto boss

ExampleOutline
The following outline is for a 5-7 page paper discussing the link between educational attainment and health. Review the other sections of this page for more detailed information about each component of this outline!

I. Introduction

A. Current Problem: Educational attainment rates are decreasing in the United States while healthcare costs are increasing.
B. Population/Area of Focus: Unskilled or low-skilled ***** workers
C. Key Terms: healthy, well-educated

Thesis Statement: Because of their income deficit (cite sources) and general susceptibility to depression (cite sources), students who drop out of high school before graduation maintain a higher risk for physical and mental health problems later in life.
II. Background

A. Historical Employment Overview: Unskilled laborers in the past were frequently unionized and adequately compensated for their work (cite sources).
B. Historical Healthcare Overview: Unskilled laborers in the past were often provided adequate healthcare and benefits (cite sources).
C. Current Link between Education and Employment Type: Increasingly, uneducated workers work in unskilled or low-skilled jobs (cite sources).
D. Gaps in the Research: Little information exists exploring the health implications of the current conditions in low-skilled jobs.
III. Major Point 1: Conditions of employment affect workers' physical health.

A. Minor Point 1: Unskilled work environments are correlated highly with worker injury (cite sources).
B. Minor Point 2: Unskilled work environments rarely provide healthcare or adequate injury recovery time (cite sources).
IV. Major Point 2: Conditions of employment affect workers' mental health

A. Minor Point 1: Employment in a low-skilled position is highly correlated with dangerous levels of stress (cite sources).
B. Minor Point 2: Stress is highly correlated with mental health issues (cite sources).
V. Major Point 3: Physical health and mental health correlate directly with one another.

A. Minor Point 1: Mental health problems and physical health problems are highly correlated (cite sources).
B. Minor Point 2: Stress manifests itself in physical form (cite sources)
VI. Major Point 4: People with more financial worries have more stress and worse physical health.

A. Minor Point 1: Many high-school dropouts face financial problems (cite sources).
B. Minor Point 2: Financial problems are often correlated with unhealthy lifestyle choices such unhealthy food choices, overconsumption/abuse of *******, chain *******, abusive relationships, etc. (cite sources).
VII. Conclusion

A. Restatement of Thesis: Students who drop out of high school are at a higher risk for both mental and physical health problems throughout their lives.
B. Next Steps: Society needs educational advocates; educators need to be aware of this situation and strive for student retention in order to promote healthy lifestyles and warn students of the risks associated with dropping out of school.
 
Eto boss

ExampleOutline
The following outline is for a 5-7 page paper discussing the link between educational attainment and health. Review the other sections of this page for more detailed information about each component of this outline!

I. Introduction

A. Current Problem: Educational attainment rates are decreasing in the United States while healthcare costs are increasing.
B. Population/Area of Focus: Unskilled or low-skilled ***** workers
C. Key Terms: healthy, well-educated

Thesis Statement: Because of their income deficit (cite sources) and general susceptibility to depression (cite sources), students who drop out of high school before graduation maintain a higher risk for physical and mental health problems later in life.
II. Background

A. Historical Employment Overview: Unskilled laborers in the past were frequently unionized and adequately compensated for their work (cite sources).
B. Historical Healthcare Overview: Unskilled laborers in the past were often provided adequate healthcare and benefits (cite sources).
C. Current Link between Education and Employment Type: Increasingly, uneducated workers work in unskilled or low-skilled jobs (cite sources).
D. Gaps in the Research: Little information exists exploring the health implications of the current conditions in low-skilled jobs.
III. Major Point 1: Conditions of employment affect workers' physical health.

A. Minor Point 1: Unskilled work environments are correlated highly with worker injury (cite sources).
B. Minor Point 2: Unskilled work environments rarely provide healthcare or adequate injury recovery time (cite sources).
IV. Major Point 2: Conditions of employment affect workers' mental health

A. Minor Point 1: Employment in a low-skilled position is highly correlated with dangerous levels of stress (cite sources).
B. Minor Point 2: Stress is highly correlated with mental health issues (cite sources).
V. Major Point 3: Physical health and mental health correlate directly with one another.

A. Minor Point 1: Mental health problems and physical health problems are highly correlated (cite sources).
B. Minor Point 2: Stress manifests itself in physical form (cite sources)
VI. Major Point 4: People with more financial worries have more stress and worse physical health.

A. Minor Point 1: Many high-school dropouts face financial problems (cite sources).
B. Minor Point 2: Financial problems are often correlated with unhealthy lifestyle choices such unhealthy food choices, overconsumption/abuse of *******, chain *******, abusive relationships, etc. (cite sources).
VII. Conclusion

A. Restatement of Thesis: Students who drop out of high school are at a higher risk for both mental and physical health problems throughout their lives.
B. Next Steps: Society needs educational advocates; educators need to be aware of this situation and strive for student retention in order to promote healthy lifestyles and warn students of the risks associated with dropping out of school.

salamat po sir sana po may makatulong huhuhuhu yung topic ko po is Evolution of Hard Disk Drives
 
bakit evolution of hard disk drives ang topic mo ang to broad naman yan?? dapat local context lang brad ang topic mo, local context means yong topic mo dapat akma sa lugar mo, " Pisonet dapat ang topic mo brad suggestion ko lang hehe
 
bakit evolution of hard disk drives ang topic mo ang to broad naman yan?? dapat local context lang brad ang topic mo, local context means yong topic mo dapat akma sa lugar mo, " Pisonet dapat ang topic mo brad suggestion ko lang hehe
kasama po ba sa evolution of technology yun ? wala po kase ako ideya kung paano gagawa ng outline eh
 
to broad ang topic ng evolution of technology, evolution na word madaming term yan tapos ang technology madaming term din yan, technology ang topic dapat mag specific kayo ano klase technology dapat, example yan computer
 
to broad ang topic ng evolution of technology, evolution na word madaming term yan tapos ang technology madaming term din yan, technology ang topic dapat mag specific kayo ano klase technology dapat, example yan computer

ano po ba masusuggest niyo na specific na topic para makapag outline
 
Status
Not open for further replies.

Similar threads

Back
Top